		rdale1	I am amazed at how much of a story you can tell in so few words. You had me from the word unacceptable.
			nice ...ditto to rdale, you bring the reader in quickly, make the scene and wrap it well. great!
		rdale1	You are correct on the title error.
			I like this a LOT
		Jakes_World	worth the cross post just to read it again!! Hi Syl!